DOI or URL of the report: https://osf.io/xqu7e
Version of the report: 6
Revised manuscript: https://osf.io/zgf8y
All revised materials uploaded to: https://osf.io/phym3/, updated manuscript under sub-directory "PCIRR Stage 2\PCI-RR submission following R&R"
Two of the reviewers from Stage 1 kindly returned to evaluate your Stage 2 submission. As you will see, the reviewers are broadly satisfied with the manuscript and offer some minor suggestions for presentational clarifications, as well as a potential issue to address in the Discussion. Following submission of your revision and response, I anticipate being able to issue a final positive recommendation of your Stage 2 manuscript without further in-depth review.
Dear all,
I have just finished going through the Stage 2 submission of "Licensing via Credentials: Replication of Monin and Miller (2001)," and I must say, I'm thoroughly impressed! The authors have done a commendable job and fully adhered to the preregistered plan.
I have only minor comments and suggestions, which are detailed in the enclosed Word document.
Great work to everyone involved!
Best regards,
Marek Vranka
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The report generally follows the pre-registered procedure and any possible deviations are sufficiently justified. Therefore, I have just a few minor comments:
1) I believe that according to the APA style commas should be included before and after statistics (e.g. „… and t(868) = −3.01, p = .006 for the gender…“ should be „… and, t(868) = −3.01, p = .006, for the gender…“).
2) The results were quite hard to follow for me. This might be a matter of preference, so feel free to ignore the recommendation, but I believe that the results would be easier to understand if they used more concrete language. For example, „Also, domain-inconsistent credentials did not show support for an effect compared with controls…“ could be something like „Also, participants who had domain-inconsistent credentials did not significanlty differ in their hiring preferences from participants without credentials…“ or even „Also, participants presented with a Black (or female) star applicant did not significanlty differ in their hiring preferences of males (or Whites)—that is, in the different domain—from participants presented with a White male star applicant…“.
3) I wonder whether a possible explanation for the lack of the credential effect might be a different perception of choosing the star applicant now and 20 year ago. It is possible that 20 year ago participants were more likely to feel that they are choosing the applicant „despite“ their race or sex and now, they might be more likely to feel that they are choosing the applicant „because“ of their race or sex. This would be partly suggested by the higher proportion of participants selecting the black/female star applicant than white male star applicant in the current study, while there was no significant difference in the original study (even though the study does not report the proportion of participants choosing the star applicant in each condition). Unfortunately, we do not have data about the perception of morality of choosing the star applicant in the original study, but is there some result that would suggest against this explanation? The discussion now mentions the possibility of cultural change as well as of the effectiveness of the manipulation, but I think this is a slightly different point than the one already made in the discussion. That is, it relates to the change in the effectiveness of the manipulation rather than of the change in the perception of the dependent variable.
Signed,
Štěpán Bahník