DOI or URL of the report: https://doi.org/10.31234/osf.io/xky4j
Version of the report: 9
Thank you for submitting a Stage 2 manuscript with very intriguing results and discussion. I think this paper needs only minor revisions.
As you can see, we received peer review comments from two experts.
One gave detailed advice on how to graphically present and describe the results, and how to treat claims in the discussion. These would benefit the manuscript from serious consideration.
The second reviewer was also quite satisfied with the manuscript, but commented on the multiple comparisons. This comment calls for a change in Section 2.4.3, which is locked in Stage 1 and cannot be directly revised. Therefore, this point can be mentioned in the discussion if necessary or added to the results section as an unregistered analysis. Alternatively, you may want to simply disagree with the reviewer. Whichever approach you choose, please let us know why in your reply.
Please see the individual peer review comments for details. We look forward to your corrections and re-submission.
Yuki Yamada, Recommender
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