DOI or URL of the report: https://osf.io/k8j5g
Version of the report: 2
As suggest by the reommender, we deleted the paragraph on the difference between relative and absolute prediction error.
Thank you for your revision. I just have one point, namely I think the new paragraph you have added on the difference between relative and absolute prediction error is probably best dropped: You have not formally tested that one slope is steeper than the other. Given they are in different units,I am not sure anything could be made of any difference that was found. Further I didn't quite understand your explanation; to the extent I did, it may imply there should be non-linear slope of pleasure against absolute error. The simplest thing would seem to be to drop it; but you can argue otherwise as well.
best
Zoltan
DOI or URL of the report: https://osf.io/4t8xn
Version of the report: 1
A complete and detailed response to the last comments of the reviewer (Jasmin Hutchinson) is provided within the revised manuscript (with track changes).
Sorry for the delay in getting back; but the good news is the revewiers are happy with your Stage 2 bar some typos and minor amendments. Well done on a nice piece of research.
In the abstract, for the contradictory statement
"By using this approach, we showed that a positive RPE-based prediction error (lower score of retrospective RPE than prospective RPE) are associated with a higher level of retrospective pleasure, and that negative RPE-based prediction error (higher score of retrospective RPE than prospective RPE) are associated with a higher level of retrospective pleasure."
You can delete the second clause (even assuming the last "higher" was meant to be "lower"), as an association does not need to be stated both ways round. Note also "are" should be "is".
I look forward to receiving your revision.
best
Zoltan
In my opinion the authors have done a good job with this project and executed the study as planned. Below I will respond to the Stage 2 review criteria. In the attached file I have shared recommended edits (using tracked changes) along with some additional comments.
In evaluating Stage 2 manuscripts, we ask reviewers to assess:
· 2A. Whether the data are able to test the authors’ proposed hypotheses (or answer the proposed research question) by passing the approved outcome-neutral criteria, such as absence of floor and ceiling effects or success of positive controls or other quality checks.
Yes, I believe the data can be used to test the authors’ proposed hypotheses.
· 2B. Whether the introduction, rationale and stated hypotheses (where applicable) are the same as the approved Stage 1 submission.
Yes, they are the same.
· 2C. Whether the authors adhered precisely to the registered study procedures.
Yes
· 2D. Where applicable, whether any unregistered exploratory analyses are justified, methodologically sound, and informative.
Yes, the complementary analyses using relative prediction error are justified, methodologically sound, and informative.
· 2E. Whether the authors’ conclusions are justified given the evidence.
Yes
Download the reviewI am completing my review based on the PCI Registered Reports Stage 2 Criteria.
The authors have been transparent throughout this process.
I believe there are some key typos or errors. The authors should proofread their manuscript to detect any remaining examples. The most clear example seems to be in the abstract.
In the abstract, the authors write:
"By using this approach, we showed that a positive RPE-based prediction error (lower score of retrospective RPE than prospective RPE) are associated with a higher level of retrospective pleasure, and that negative RPE-based prediction error (higher score of retrospective RPE than prospective RPE) are associated with a higher level of retrospective pleasure."
Higher level of retrospective pleasure is used in both sitautions, and so this needs to be changed.