Running pleasure results from finding it easier than you thought you would
Do prediction errors of perceived exertion inform the level of running pleasure?
Abstract
Recommendation: posted 14 June 2024, validated 14 June 2024
Dienes, Z. (2024) Running pleasure results from finding it easier than you thought you would. Peer Community in Registered Reports, 100771. 10.24072/pci.rr.100771
This is a stage 2 based on:
Damien Brevers, Guillaume Martinent, İrem Tuğçe Öz, Olivier Desmedt, Bas de Geus
https://osf.io/y8d9m
Recommendation
The Stage 2 manuscript received one round of review from two external reviewers, then some minor comments from the recommender, after which it was judged to satisfy the Stage 2 criteria and was awarded a positive recommendation.
Level of bias control achieved: Level 6. No part of the data or evidence that was used to answer the research question was generated until after IPA.
List of eligible PCI RR-friendly journals:
- Communications in Kinesiology
- In&Vertebrates
- Peer Community Journal
- PeerJ
- Psychology of Consciousness: Theory, Research and Practice
- Royal Society Open Science
- Studia Psychologica
- Swiss Psychology Open
1. Brevers, D., Martinent, G., Oz, I. T., Desmedt, O. & de Geus, B. (2024). Do prediction errors of perceived exertion inform the level of running pleasure? [Stage 2]. In principle acceptance of Version 3 by Peer Community in Registered Reports. https://osf.io/xfgqp
The recommender in charge of the evaluation of the article and the reviewers declared that they have no conflict of interest (as defined in the code of conduct of PCI) with the authors or with the content of the article.
Evaluation round #2
DOI or URL of the report: https://osf.io/k8j5g
Version of the report: 2
Author's Reply, 13 Jun 2024
As suggest by the reommender, we deleted the paragraph on the difference between relative and absolute prediction error.
Decision by Zoltan Dienes, posted 13 Jun 2024, validated 13 Jun 2024
Thank you for your revision. I just have one point, namely I think the new paragraph you have added on the difference between relative and absolute prediction error is probably best dropped: You have not formally tested that one slope is steeper than the other. Given they are in different units,I am not sure anything could be made of any difference that was found. Further I didn't quite understand your explanation; to the extent I did, it may imply there should be non-linear slope of pleasure against absolute error. The simplest thing would seem to be to drop it; but you can argue otherwise as well.
best
Zoltan
Evaluation round #1
DOI or URL of the report: https://osf.io/4t8xn
Version of the report: 1
Author's Reply, 11 Jun 2024
A complete and detailed response to the last comments of the reviewer (Jasmin Hutchinson) is provided within the revised manuscript (with track changes).
Decision by Zoltan Dienes, posted 07 Jun 2024, validated 07 Jun 2024
Sorry for the delay in getting back; but the good news is the revewiers are happy with your Stage 2 bar some typos and minor amendments. Well done on a nice piece of research.
In the abstract, for the contradictory statement
"By using this approach, we showed that a positive RPE-based prediction error (lower score of retrospective RPE than prospective RPE) are associated with a higher level of retrospective pleasure, and that negative RPE-based prediction error (higher score of retrospective RPE than prospective RPE) are associated with a higher level of retrospective pleasure."
You can delete the second clause (even assuming the last "higher" was meant to be "lower"), as an association does not need to be stated both ways round. Note also "are" should be "is".
I look forward to receiving your revision.
best
Zoltan
Reviewed by Jasmin Hutchinson, 22 May 2024
In my opinion the authors have done a good job with this project and executed the study as planned. Below I will respond to the Stage 2 review criteria. In the attached file I have shared recommended edits (using tracked changes) along with some additional comments.
In evaluating Stage 2 manuscripts, we ask reviewers to assess:
· 2A. Whether the data are able to test the authors’ proposed hypotheses (or answer the proposed research question) by passing the approved outcome-neutral criteria, such as absence of floor and ceiling effects or success of positive controls or other quality checks.
Yes, I believe the data can be used to test the authors’ proposed hypotheses.
· 2B. Whether the introduction, rationale and stated hypotheses (where applicable) are the same as the approved Stage 1 submission.
Yes, they are the same.
· 2C. Whether the authors adhered precisely to the registered study procedures.
Yes
· 2D. Where applicable, whether any unregistered exploratory analyses are justified, methodologically sound, and informative.
Yes, the complementary analyses using relative prediction error are justified, methodologically sound, and informative.
· 2E. Whether the authors’ conclusions are justified given the evidence.
Yes
Download the reviewReviewed by anonymous reviewer 1, 20 May 2024
I am completing my review based on the PCI Registered Reports Stage 2 Criteria.
- Whether data are able to test the authors' original proposed hypotheses by passing approved outcome-neutral criteira, sucha s absence of floor and ceiling effects or success of positive controls or other quality checks.
- This criterion is met.
- Whether the introduction, rationale, and tated hypotheses (where applicable) are the same as the approved stage 1 submission.
- This criterion is met.
- Whether the authors adherenced precisely to study procedures.
- This criterion is met.
- Where applicable, whether any unregistered exploratory analyses are justified, methodologically sound, and informative.
- This criterion is met. The authors do a good job clearly labeling their exploratory analyses.
- Whether the authors'; conclusions are justified given the evidence.
- This criterion is met.
The authors have been transparent throughout this process.
I believe there are some key typos or errors. The authors should proofread their manuscript to detect any remaining examples. The most clear example seems to be in the abstract.
In the abstract, the authors write:
"By using this approach, we showed that a positive RPE-based prediction error (lower score of retrospective RPE than prospective RPE) are associated with a higher level of retrospective pleasure, and that negative RPE-based prediction error (higher score of retrospective RPE than prospective RPE) are associated with a higher level of retrospective pleasure."
Higher level of retrospective pleasure is used in both sitautions, and so this needs to be changed.